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People would like to do some shopping in the city,for there are many goods for them to choose; parents want to send their children in the city,for the educational facilities in the city are more advanced; workers hope to work in the city,for they have more opportunities and can earn more money.the traffic in cities is more convenient.You can go somewhere by plane、subway、bus or taxi.Yet people still go the countryside to enjoy the rural life if they have time to enjoy the fresh air.
看看有沒有語病,改的檢點(diǎn)容易一點(diǎn).
People would like to do some shopping in the city,for there are many goods for them to choose; parents want to send their children in the city,for the educational facilities in the city are more advanced; workers hope to work in the city,for they have more opportunities and can earn more money.the traffic in cities is more convenient.You can go somewhere by plane、subway、bus or taxi.Yet people still go the countryside to enjoy the rural life if they have time to enjoy the fresh air.
看看有沒有語病,改的檢點(diǎn)容易一點(diǎn).
英語人氣:984 ℃時(shí)間:2020-09-28 01:22:34
優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
city前最好不加the.somewhere改成anywhere.go (to)the countryside最好把改過的全文都發(fā)一下。。。。People would like to do some shopping in cities, for there are many goods for them to choose; parents want to send their children to cities, for the educational facilities inities are more advanced; workers hope to work incities, because they have more opportunities and they can earn more money.the traffic in cities is more convenient.You can go anywhere by plane、subway、bus or taxi.Yet people still go to the countryside to enjoy the rural life if they have time to enjoy the fresh air。
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