這句話關(guān)鍵的問(wèn)題是沒(méi)有動(dòng)詞.
Distribution management is aiming for improving customer satisfaction through raising the quality of service,with lower distribution cost,better planning,organization,coordination and better control of distribution activities.
這句話太長(zhǎng)了,可以考慮分成幾句.
The main purpose of distribution management is to improve customer satisfaction.Necessary means to achieve that are:1) raise the quality of service; 2) lower distribution costs; 3) more efficient planning,organization,and coordination; 4) last but not least,better control of distribution activities.
這樣表達(dá)比較清晰.