1. Although I like eating junk food ,but I try to eat it only once a month.
-> 或者去掉Although或者把but去掉,中國人說話習(xí)慣是:雖然...但是,但英文里只能用一個,即用了although就不能再用but
意:雖然我喜歡吃垃圾食品,不過我試著每月只吃一次.
2. She hardly ever exercises,so she is kind of unhealthy.
-> kind of unhealthy改成unhealthy或者unhealthiness kind of后面只能跟名詞(介詞后面用名詞作賓語),所以應(yīng)該用unhealthiness, 或不要用kind of,直接用形容詞unhealthy作she is的表語也行
意:她幾乎不怎么鍛煉身體,所以她不太健康.

3. Reading English every morning helps me learning English well.
-> help sb. do sth. 所以learning改成learn
意:每天早上讀英語幫助我英語學(xué)得好.
4. Emily is a good student.She is good for every subject.
-> for改成atbe good at...擅長\...方面做得好(固定用法)
意:艾米莉是個好學(xué)生,她每個學(xué)科都很擅長.