English In My Eyes
Most English learners take English as a foreign language.However,I always believe that a language has emotion.That is my first experience of English---- an emotional language.
English is not like a fool who pays you emotion without any reward.（這一句意思很怪異建議更改或去掉,我不知道你要表達什么） You should pay back with your patience and emotion by singing in it,writing in it and making foreign friends.Learning English is not an easy job.You ought to stick with it and be crazy for it.So,when you are happy with English,you should try to keep this going on; when you are angry with English exams or practices,you should be nice and gentle to English because it eassily gets hurt.The more you love English,the more progress and deeper understanding you can get.It just likes a little baby who needs your care and guidance.It also like a good friend who gives you help and encourage.
This writing is not showing a way to learn English,but a way to understand it.We have learnt foreign language for many years,so many that we might not be sure how many years we've spent on it indeed.We need a little time to understand English.I hope this could be helpful to English learners and English users.
我覺得整篇文章中式英語的味道很比較濃,而且感覺文章不大通順也就是意思怪怪的,不知道這篇文章的用途是什么,我把認為要修改的地方都認真修改了下,希望你再把文章主體重新考慮一下想清楚想要表達的意思.
PS:已經(jīng)修改完了,希望我的回答能夠幫到你~