幫忙改英語語法錯誤.
Students studying in public school have many advantages.Students can learn more than they stay at home.Therefore,children should go to public school to study.
First of all,physical education courses can promote children's general health.In public school,children must participate and do some exercise every day.This regular physical exercise for children is very good.Physical education also teaches about how to get balance nutrition,for children will know what foods are good for their health,and they will maintain good eating habits.students should learn the importance of physical fitness at an ealy age,because students can reduce their stress while doing exercise and exercise gives students a good balance.
Although,physical education teaches children how to get life skills.Kids learn about how to communicate whith others,they can give their friend some good recommendations,yet they can not deliberately criticism to their friends,kids should respect each other.Kids also can learn about the benefits of healthy competition.They can not cheat the game and they should give congranduation to winner.Kids learn about the self-discipline is a important life skill.For example,they can not watch TV,play games when they doing homework,and they must to observe the rules.
請高手指教,幫小弟改下其中的錯誤,有些句子連接的不是很好,如果能指點(diǎn)出來就更好了.