英語文章求檢查語法和潤色什么的.
題目大概意思是讓你說說對犯人是送監(jiān)獄好還是進(jìn)行教育好.250詞.下邊是我寫的.
Above all,I can not completely agree with the two practices.
Sending criminals to the prison positively is not an effective way to deal with them,but we all know that some criminals are dangerous; sending them to the prison actually means a protection to other citizens.In likewise,education and training are better indeed,but what if the criminals have dispute with theirteacher?
However,imprisonment without any human-oriented management and education seems to disrespecthuman rights.Nowadays,death penalty has been called off in many regions by beingaccused of disrespect for newgate saint’s human rights.So that chances forcriminals to reduce penalty and even reform themselves make good sense.
Gratifyingly,there are many such places in the world that collect the criminals and educate them as well.Do you know where the national college entrance examination papers isproduced?It is in the prison.That is,criminals are not only suffering the imprisonment but also accepting the reformation through labour.I think it is away that got the best of both worlds.In one hand the criminals got what they deserved,in the other hand,they provide us some things that are unsuitable tobe produced in other places.They make contributions to the society,what ismore,they can found the value of life in labor.
Moreover,many countries have handled in the same way and it takes effect.So I think penalty combined with reform should be considered a good way to deal with criminals.