考試作文自認(rèn)為寫的沒錯,但改卷老師認(rèn)為錯了.
一：the river nearby was POLLUTED BADLY,I haven't even swum in the river.這句子你覺得哪里錯了?注意大寫處有無語序錯誤.
二：the water has become much clearer than before,and so,many people come to the river to have some fun.這句有幾個地方.一是河水不可以用clear修飾嗎?居然給我打錯.而是 and so 那個地方,我在那里寫了個逗號,and無實意,也就是說水變清澈了,因此,很多人去玩.so那里不能寫逗號隔開嗎?我主要是怕如果不用逗號的話句子會產(chǎn)生歧義,也就是會理解成so many people（很多人）而我要表達的是“因此,很多人……”.還有就是have some fun.請問可以用some修飾一下fun嗎?
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