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just now my mother sent me a message that my family has gone to my grandma's house to enjoy the mid-autumn day.and i woundn't go because it is too far away .so i will enjoy it myself or with my friends.my friend said he has sent aome mooncakes to me .but i haven't received yet.where and how will i enjoy the day.i am hoping its coming.i remembered the year befor last year,i spent the day with my best friend D of colledge.we went out and talked about our feelings and some interesting things.that's a good feeling .i will remember that forever.i cherish the memory of the day in my home.and i cherish the smell of mooncakes in the fridge.it is a different kind of taste.and it be feeled only in your family.that tastes mixed with the favour of family and love.but this time i can't enjoy it ,because i don't have a fridge.and just now i watched my show.and it said that they will have autumn programs on sunday.i like shanghai tv.and i think many stars from my show will come to the program.and i think i will enjoy it .for that it is my favourite program.and maybe i can watch it with eating the mooncakes.it is funny.happy mid-autumn's day.my ralatives,my friends and my catty.