1.^don't (before "love")
2.right.
3.happily -- > happy
5.eating --> having
6.are --> were
7.our --> their
8.honestly --> honest
here is the revised one:(with some typing mistakes pointed out).
some students do not like taking(talking) about their parents often as if their parents don't love them very much(.) are you going on well with your parents?you and your parents will be very happy if you can be friends.here are some way (ways) to have a good talk with them.find a good time to talk,like when you are having dinner.(,) going out for walk and watching tv.tell them 766384664(what) you are interested in,or ask them about their lives when they were young.they love to talk about their past!meet them face to face and listen to them carefully.be honest,and you parents will trust you more.