你是高中生吧,我水平有限,盡量不改變原意,盡量用你學(xué)過的單詞,只能改這個程度了,相互學(xué)習(xí)嘛.如果有高手看見的話,請幫忙改改.
文章整體挺好的,尤其是最后一段（我沒有改動）,但是文中有一些語法錯誤,而且應(yīng)該少用重復(fù)的單詞和短語,我們還得繼續(xù)努力...
Wealth or Health
If I have to choose one from health and wealth,the former would hold my attraction more.
For one thing,health is the foundation of achieving wealth ,because we can create wealth as long as we are healthy.Whereas if you has a lot of money,wealth would make you lack of goals and you would be lazy and have no power to do what you want to do .For another ,when you are in wealth ,you might be famous and some outlaws would attact you for money.In contrast to that ,health is the biggest fortune and only by keeping in health can we guarantee to have the other one .
What wealth has achieved may be of much profit to many people while what health has fulfilled will be of great benefit to my life.
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Wealth or Health
If my choice were restricted between health and wealth,the former would hold more attraction for me.
For one thing,as long as you health,you will to create wealth in your hands.By contrast,health can make you lazy,because when you has a lot of money,don’t need a lot of things that you do.For other,when you have a lot of money,you will be famous.Some outlaws will on you for his money.In contrast to that,health is the biggest cost,only under the health premise can have other.
What wealth has achieved may be of much profit to many people while what health has fulfilled will be of great benefit to my life.
Wealth or Health
If my choice were restricted between health and wealth,the former would hold more attraction for me.
For one thing,as long as you health,you will to create wealth in your hands.By contrast,health can make you lazy,because when you has a lot of money,don’t need a lot of things that you do.For other,when you have a lot of money,you will be famous.Some outlaws will on you for his money.In contrast to that,health is the biggest cost,only under the health premise can have other.
What wealth has achieved may be of much profit to many people while what health has fulfilled will be of great benefit to my life.
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