首先你這篇文章的高級詞匯太少了
a lot of =可以用 a large amount of 很形象的描述很多,更重要的是詞匯多
或者用 numerous 對不對.
such as＝同樣的道理 ,例如也有很多高級詞匯,for instance 這就是個比較好的高級詞匯
But= 可以用 nonetheless 你看這個詞看起來就很難,只要你記住,下次就可以大展身手了
或者用 whereas
第二 你的句式太單調(diào)了,廢話多
不要總是we ,i的要多用復合句.比如第二句話講作息時間的,可以這樣寫
The study time of whole day is from 5:20 to 21:30 and we got up at 4:50 and go to bed at 22:00.
注意前后數(shù)字要統(tǒng)一.
這是我的建議,加油阿.急需你采納我.
請大家?guī)臀倚薷囊幌逻@篇英語作文,
請大家?guī)臀倚薷囊幌逻@篇英語作文,
We have a lot of lessons,such as Chinese,math,English,physics,chemistry,histery and so on.We also have a lot of schoolwork,but we think they will improve our studying.
At about half past four,we begin get up.The first class of all day is starts at 5:20,At half past nine,we finish study.Then we go to bed at ten o'clock.
we have three meals a day,the food is just so-so.In our spare times,we often do some sport.
It's necessary for us to study hard.because of the dream,we always try our best to do everything.We believe,"Where there is a well,there is a way".
We have a lot of lessons,such as Chinese,math,English,physics,chemistry,histery and so on.We also have a lot of schoolwork,but we think they will improve our studying.
At about half past four,we begin get up.The first class of all day is starts at 5:20,At half past nine,we finish study.Then we go to bed at ten o'clock.
we have three meals a day,the food is just so-so.In our spare times,we often do some sport.
It's necessary for us to study hard.because of the dream,we always try our best to do everything.We believe,"Where there is a well,there is a way".
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