高手麻煩看下這幾句話有沒有語法問題
(1)One Sunday my mother (Mother) had (made) me take my little young brother to the a trip to the country.
主要問下那個"to the a trip to the country"這里有沒有問題,感覺這里是不是打錯了?
(2) I consider this an unchangeable truth.
這里的"this"用得對嗎?是不是也可用"it"代替?
(3) Because we all know that we can earn money be work but can not in any way get back time (in anyway).
這里的"be work"用得對嗎?感覺好像是"by work"吧.
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這里是原文( (1),(2)是第一篇的,(3)是第二篇的):
第六天：A TRIP TO THE COUNTRY 鄉(xiāng)村游記
One Sunday my mother (Mother) had (made) me take my little young brother to the a trip to the country. She bade me take good care of him.
While we were walking along the road, the sun was shining brightly and the breeze was blowing gently. We saw the beautiful flowers smile (smiling) at us and heard the birds sing (singing) their sweet songs on the trees. The scenery was indeed very pretty (beautiful).
When we felt tired, we returned home. We saw Mother (our mother) wait (waiting) for us at the door.
有一個星期日,我母親叫我?guī)〉艿苋ムl(xiāng)村游歷.她吩咐我要好好照料他.
當(dāng)我們沿著道路行走的時候,太陽燦爛地照耀著,微風(fēng)輕輕地吹著.我們看見美麗的花兒對我們微笑著,并聽見鳥兒在樹上唱著悅耳的歌曲,風(fēng)景實(shí)十分美麗.
當(dāng)我們感覺到疲倦的時候,我們就回家了.我們看見母親正在門口等候我們.
第七天：BE PATRIOTIC 要愛國
It is the duty of every citizen to make the country rich and powerful (To make the country rich and strong is...). In order to accomplish this object one must be patriotic (love his country). I consider this an unchangeable truth.
How can a student love his country (be patriotic)? I find my answer very simple and clear. He must study hard and store up knowledge so as to serve his (the) country in the future. If every student can do according to what I said, the country will certainly be rich and powerful.
要使國家富強(qiáng)是每個公民的責(zé)任.為了達(dá)到此目的,必須愛國.我認(rèn)為這是一條不易的定理.
一個學(xué)生如何才能愛國呢?我發(fā)覺答復(fù)很簡單明了.他必須用功讀書并積儲知識以便將來服務(wù)國家.如果每個學(xué)生能按照我所說的去做,國家一定會富強(qiáng).
這是在網(wǎng)上找的"42天學(xué)好英語"短文中其中2篇,感覺很不錯,尤其對寫作很有幫助,各位也可以在網(wǎng)上找一找.但其中有些語句不確定對不對,所以請高手幫忙看看咯