本人英語一般,但還是進(jìn)來看了看.
我感覺寫的蠻好的.
說點(diǎn)我的感想哈.第一呢,delay 你是想表達(dá)耽誤學(xué)生學(xué)習(xí)么?我感覺這詞不是很適合.
第二,好像句子都是很簡(jiǎn)單的結(jié)構(gòu).最后,有關(guān)于你自己的opinion,我看著有點(diǎn)牽強(qiáng),說服讀者很難.
加油.“耽誤學(xué)習(xí)”好像有這種表達(dá)方式啊，準(zhǔn)確的應(yīng)該是什么呢？問了些同學(xué)，她們說可以用這種表達(dá)，嘿嘿。influence 也可以?？赡芪宜季S定勢(shì)了。你寫的不錯(cuò)了。加油。
請(qǐng)哪位老師幫改一下英語作文,十分感謝!
請(qǐng)哪位老師幫改一下英語作文,十分感謝!
Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet. On the one hand, blogs can be the windows for students to show theirselves to others. It’s also a good way to relax theirselves from the pressure of study. However, on the other hand, many parents and teachers think it is a waste of time and energy to manage a blogs. It will delay the study of students. In my opinion, It is a good way to show oneself. The opening of students’ blogs can help the owners have more confidence. The blogs without the influence of students’ Study should be encouraged.
Nowadays, it is a common phenomenon that more and more high school students open their own blogs on the Internet. On the one hand, blogs can be the windows for students to show theirselves to others. It’s also a good way to relax theirselves from the pressure of study. However, on the other hand, many parents and teachers think it is a waste of time and energy to manage a blogs. It will delay the study of students. In my opinion, It is a good way to show oneself. The opening of students’ blogs can help the owners have more confidence. The blogs without the influence of students’ Study should be encouraged.
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