內(nèi)容寫得不錯(cuò)哦~有些細(xì)節(jié)方面的時(shí)態(tài)和用法替你改過(guò)了.文章如下
Mrs xu:
I am very careless,so my English is not very good..I am fear of English.When I was a junior high school student,you became my English teacher.Your English is very good.You are my hero.You are kind to us.when i didn't pass the exam,you criticized me with a smile,so I began to focus the importance of English.
Although I will become a senior (student) two years later and you will have to retire,I will not forget your smiling face.You are my English teacher.Forever.
Finally,happy birthday to you!
With best wishes
yours sincerely
XXX
盡量保持了原句的風(fēng)格和意思哦.
有些地方在將來(lái)的使用中希望以后可以注意,
1.“so”這個(gè)單詞翻譯為“所以”的時(shí)候,一般不寫在句子開(kāi)端,
2.”Although...,..."這個(gè)句式表示“雖然...,但是...”不過(guò)在英文的使用中,although是不可以和but放在一起用的,你可以兩種方式任選其一,
3.with best wishes,這里我沒(méi)有給你改,但是個(gè)人建議兩種方案"With my best wishes" 或者"Best wishes"
4.要有落款 yours sincerely,的下方寫上名字