第一篇Last Friday was my birthday.We had a birthday party at school.We held it at the break time.My parents brought me a big birthday cake.I lit the candles and put them on the cake.My classmates sang the birthday song to me.I was so touching at the moment.I made a wish that I can study well and make progress every day.Soon after that,I cut the cake and shared it with my classmates.Although the birthday part lasted for 20 minutes,we all felt happy上周五是我的生日.我們在學(xué)校舉辦了一個生日晚會.我們舉行了它的休息時間.我的父母給我一個大的生日蛋糕.我點燃了蠟燭,放在蛋糕.我的同學(xué)對我唱了生日歌.我是如此感人的時刻.我希望我能好好學(xué)習(xí),天天向上.不久之后,我把蛋糕切和共享它與我的同學(xué).盡管部分持續(xù)了20分鐘的生日,我們都感到快樂
第二篇My birthday party.
Today is my (你幾歲就寫幾歲,這里用序數(shù)詞）birthday.I have a birthday party with my family.My mom and dad give me a beautiful gift,and my grandmom cooks a delicious meal for me.I love the cake and the food very much.I feel very happy with my family and it is a good memory for me.
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我的生日聚會
今天是我第（.）個生日.我和我的家人辦了一個生日聚會.我的媽媽和爸爸送我了一格漂亮的禮物,我的奶奶做了一頓很美味的飯.我非常喜歡蛋糕和飯菜.我和我的家人在一起感到很快樂,并且這給我留下了美好的回憶.
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恩,這種的“過生日"的文章用過去式的比較好,