第二句時(shí)態(tài)是過(guò)去式
it is so easy 前加for 或 because
mew 改成 new
after few days 加個(gè) a
你第二段有First of all,但沒(méi)下文了,比如second ,finally 等
以下是鄙人寫(xiě)的主題為建國(guó)六十周年帶來(lái)變化的作文,幫忙看一下有沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤：
以下是鄙人寫(xiě)的主題為建國(guó)六十周年帶來(lái)變化的作文,幫忙看一下有沒(méi)有語(yǔ)法錯(cuò)誤：
All the changes in my life
I like to draw,and I can draw well.But many years ago,the small town where I live has not drawing tools.So I can not draw
what I want to draw.
But now,Tremendous changes have taken place here.First of all,
I can buy drawing tools via the Internet,it is so easy I only need
to complete address and telephone number,after few days,I will get
my mew drawing tools!It is really fast By the way,the postman is
friendly and the drawing tools which I bought is very nice!
New,I can draw every thing what I want to draw.What a good thing!All this is thanks to the reform and opening up!I realized my dream at last.
如果全對(duì)的話(huà)，提幾條建議也行，我覺(jué)得還是太短了，能不能幫忙加點(diǎn)？加的好的話(huà)還可以提高懸賞
All the changes in my life
I like to draw,and I can draw well.But many years ago,the small town where I live has not drawing tools.So I can not draw
what I want to draw.
But now,Tremendous changes have taken place here.First of all,
I can buy drawing tools via the Internet,it is so easy I only need
to complete address and telephone number,after few days,I will get
my mew drawing tools!It is really fast By the way,the postman is
friendly and the drawing tools which I bought is very nice!
New,I can draw every thing what I want to draw.What a good thing!All this is thanks to the reform and opening up!I realized my dream at last.
如果全對(duì)的話(huà)，提幾條建議也行，我覺(jué)得還是太短了，能不能幫忙加點(diǎn)？加的好的話(huà)還可以提高懸賞
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