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學(xué)校要求按格式寫一篇游記,寫完之后我不知道有沒有語(yǔ)法上的錯(cuò)誤（最近中式英文很厲害）麻煩大家?guī)兔纯?br/>In this summer holiday,I went to Panlong Gorge with my classmates.
Panlong Gorge is a place which with scenic beauty,the green hills and clear waters made us relaxed.
Favorite scenery:The water and the lavenders.
The water gave us a deep impression,trees grown around the both sides of the rivulet and water is cool and clear.
If you look out of the window,you will see the lavenders is full of you eyes.How beautiful they are!Everyone who has been to there says.
Memorable moment:
We were eating delicious food while we are enjoying the beautiful scenery,during that time,we could hear the songs of bird,and breathe the fresh air.I never feel eased since I have gone into grade 9.