brave 作動(dòng)詞后面要加 oneself
You must do something for you,后面的you要換成yourself
In order to.不能自己成句,前面或后面要加半句,所以建議把前面的嘆號(hào)改逗號(hào),驚嘆號(hào)挪到后面.
If you now think that you should do something to fight back,please immediately brave yourself to do it!No matter what it is!Do not regret it!You must do something for yourself,for your dignity,in order to prove that you are no longer a wimp!
這樣雖然句子還是有些生硬,不過語(yǔ)法就沒錯(cuò)誤了.要改的在順暢些,這樣改：
If you now feel that you should do something to fight back,brave yourself to do it immediately,no matter what it is!And do not regret it afterwards!You must do something for yourself,for your dignity,to prove that you are not a wimp anymore!