Ye Shiwen is a girl.She is form Zhe Jiang.She is 16 years old.She is a good swimmer.She is swimming in circles:a rare flower.The Olympic Games in London,Ye Shiwen Create a miracle.She won two gold medals in swimming,London has become the first Olympic double gold medalist.She will be after Phelps swimming strong one!come on!You will create greater glories!
葉詩文是一個女孩兒.她來自浙江.她16歲.她是一個很棒的游泳健將.她是游泳界的一朵奇葩.在倫敦奧運會上,葉詩文創(chuàng)造了奇跡,她成功包攬了游泳項目的兩枚金牌,成為了倫敦奧運會第一個雙金得主.她將是繼菲爾普斯之后的泳壇強者之一!加油!你一定會再創(chuàng)輝煌的!
我是一個小學生,這些全都是我一個個想出來、打出來的,參考了些書本,可能有些語病,不過多給點兒分吧.