求助英語高手幫我看一下這段有沒有語法錯誤,是否通順.
求助英語高手幫我看一下這段有沒有語法錯誤,是否通順.
Our company,Ken J,is located in the centre of the city for a cell company will make its greatest profit in the most prosperous district.It is on the first floor of a mall whose rent is high.The company has small offices for our employees surrounding a hall which allows customers to choose the mobile phones they like.The address of the company is No.15 Wingston Street and you are sincerely welcomed here no matter as a customer or as an employee.Our company opens from 9 am to 5 pm on workdays and from 8 am to 7 pm on weekends.
Our company,Ken J,is located in the centre of the city for a cell company will make its greatest profit in the most prosperous district.It is on the first floor of a mall whose rent is high.The company has small offices for our employees surrounding a hall which allows customers to choose the mobile phones they like.The address of the company is No.15 Wingston Street and you are sincerely welcomed here no matter as a customer or as an employee.Our company opens from 9 am to 5 pm on workdays and from 8 am to 7 pm on weekends.
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總的來說還是不錯,個別地方錯誤,for改成aswhose改成where中間一整句有問題,我修改了am pm后面要加"."(點)修改后如下：Our company,Ken J,is located in the centre of the city as a cell company will make its gre...
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