初三英語作文,幫忙修改一下
初三英語作文,幫忙修改一下
關(guān)于節(jié)約用水的,幫我看看哪里有錯誤哪里不通順,提提意見
Can you imagine life without water? Can you imagine that you can't wash clothes,clean the floor,cook and even drink one day? If you think the water on the earth won't be used up? Maybe you never noticed that the water on the earth is less than before.And the water in the many places hasn't been drink because it wasn't safe for us. So,we must save the water every minute.
But how can we save the water in in life? I think we can use the water has been wash rice to wash vegetables rice. We can use the clean water to wash clothes, and use the dirty water to rush to toilet.It can save much water if everyone does that.And have you have any advece about saving water?
I believe that our lifes won't be without water if everyone saves water!
關(guān)于節(jié)約用水的,幫我看看哪里有錯誤哪里不通順,提提意見
Can you imagine life without water? Can you imagine that you can't wash clothes,clean the floor,cook and even drink one day? If you think the water on the earth won't be used up? Maybe you never noticed that the water on the earth is less than before.And the water in the many places hasn't been drink because it wasn't safe for us. So,we must save the water every minute.
But how can we save the water in in life? I think we can use the water has been wash rice to wash vegetables rice. We can use the clean water to wash clothes, and use the dirty water to rush to toilet.It can save much water if everyone does that.And have you have any advece about saving water?
I believe that our lifes won't be without water if everyone saves water!
英語人氣:404 ℃時間:2020-01-27 20:02:32
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第二行后一句話有問題,if應(yīng)改成do.第三行最后一個the去掉第四行根據(jù)意思我認為應(yīng)把hasn't been drink改為can't be drunk.第二段第一句話多了一個in.第二句話語法有問題.改為I think we can use the water having was...
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