求修改初三英語作文
大概會(huì)有很多語法錯(cuò)誤……
Unforgettable Experience,
Some memory will not disappear when the time past.I'm 15 years old now,but an experience in my childhood is still clear and unforgettable.One day,all my family went to climb a mountain.There father told me if I was the first one to reach the top,I would be given a toy.The mountain was high and difficult to climb,but I didn't give up.In the end I got to the top first.I learned that I shouldn't give up when I meet with difficulties from this experience,it was really unforgettable.
恩,把語法錯(cuò)誤挑出來然后修改一下就可以了……實(shí)在羞于見人所以我匿名了……