短文改錯 My hometown is Brighton where is not a very big town.It is on the coast about 50 mi...
短文改錯 My hometown is Brighton where is not a very big town.It is on the coast about 50 miles from London and has population of about 300,000.Of course it isn't as interested as London.But the air is a lot cleaner and good because there is little pollution here.There are a few factories in Brighton,but not many.As a result,that isn't very easy to find a jod here.My father used to working in a steel factory which shut down a year ago and my father loses his jod.There are a lot of hotels and language schools in the town.On summer the town is full of traveler.My father has been decided to open a small gift shop.