求高手幫我修改英語(yǔ)作文的錯(cuò)誤
Our hometown is Laohekou.我們的家鄉(xiāng)是老河口It is near the Hanjiang River.它在漢江旁邊 It is very clean and beautiful.它很美麗和干凈Its nick name is small Hankou.它的綽號(hào)是小漢口Hanjiang RIver is very cold and clean.漢江很涼和清We can see many fish swim in the river.我們能看見(jiàn)很多魚在河里 In the evening,many peaple dance at Zhongshan park.在晚上,很多人在中山公園跳舞 Yujinxincheng is the higtest build in Laohekou.玉錦新城是老河口最高的樓 Laohekou has Baihuashan Mountain,Lihuahu Lake and Erpishan Mountain.老河口有百花山,梨花湖和二皮山 They are beautiful.他們很美 there are Daxiantao peaches,Hanshuili Peers in Laohekou.大仙桃和漢水梨產(chǎn)自老河口 they are tasty.他們很美味 Laohekou is our hometown.老河口是我們的家鄉(xiāng) I love Laohekou very much.我非常愛(ài)老河口以中文為準(zhǔn)