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  • 幫我看看這篇英語作文寫的有什么問題

    幫我看看這篇英語作文寫的有什么問題
    One day,Li Hua in the gate way to mouth to pick up a classroom building size is 40 * 60 cm yellow suitcase,
    Lost and Found
    One day,li hua found the suitcase is yellow.It size is 40 * 60 cm.There are a jacket,three textbooks,and which an English book is; there are 100yuan in an English book.And there is a radio,and a pencil box in it.Suitcase is on the way to the teaching building at the school gate picked up.
    Address:High school class one,Grade six.Li Hua
    Tel:13764886999 please make reservations in advance
    不好意思,前面第一段,汗一個,有一句話多余。
    英語人氣:511 ℃時間:2019-09-18 12:59:38
    優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
    很多錯誤啊
    THERE BE句型有就近原則不知道嗎?
    應(yīng)該是There is a jacket.
    而且后面直接說就可以,為什么要加定語從句啊
    最好把所有的東西一句話說完
    再介紹細(xì)節(jié),要不很亂,而且多次重復(fù)
    最后一句話很別扭
    改為:Li Hua picked up that suitcase at the school gate,on the way to the teaching building
    要是有必要的話可以HI我,我全天在線
    可以重寫
    純正美語,希望加分,也希望有幫到你,我急用分,
    我來回答
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