很多錯誤啊
THERE BE句型有就近原則不知道嗎?
應(yīng)該是There is a jacket.
而且后面直接說就可以,為什么要加定語從句啊
最好把所有的東西一句話說完
再介紹細(xì)節(jié),要不很亂,而且多次重復(fù)
最后一句話很別扭
改為:Li Hua picked up that suitcase at the school gate,on the way to the teaching building
要是有必要的話可以HI我,我全天在線
可以重寫
純正美語,希望加分,也希望有幫到你,我急用分,
幫我看看這篇英語作文寫的有什么問題
幫我看看這篇英語作文寫的有什么問題
One day,Li Hua in the gate way to mouth to pick up a classroom building size is 40 * 60 cm yellow suitcase,
Lost and Found
One day,li hua found the suitcase is yellow.It size is 40 * 60 cm.There are a jacket,three textbooks,and which an English book is; there are 100yuan in an English book.And there is a radio,and a pencil box in it.Suitcase is on the way to the teaching building at the school gate picked up.
Address:High school class one,Grade six.Li Hua
Tel:13764886999 please make reservations in advance
不好意思,前面第一段,汗一個,有一句話多余。
One day,Li Hua in the gate way to mouth to pick up a classroom building size is 40 * 60 cm yellow suitcase,
Lost and Found
One day,li hua found the suitcase is yellow.It size is 40 * 60 cm.There are a jacket,three textbooks,and which an English book is; there are 100yuan in an English book.And there is a radio,and a pencil box in it.Suitcase is on the way to the teaching building at the school gate picked up.
Address:High school class one,Grade six.Li Hua
Tel:13764886999 please make reservations in advance
不好意思,前面第一段,汗一個,有一句話多余。
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