可以看出你的英文水平還是比較高的.但是仍然有一些問題.首先,第一段你的句子太長了,就算是國外大學的論文都很少寫這種一口氣讀不完的句子,建議你把第一句話斷成兩句,你這種從句中用從句的寫法是不可取的.作文應該簡潔明了,而不是秀從句,而且很容易出錯.其中一些很小的語法錯誤我也幫你改了:Basically,the picture vividly portrays a scene that two persons are confused and startling about the words in the advertising board.The board,however,conveys another frightening meaning — sale of death bodies instead of normal goods.Apparently,the drawer is telling us the serious consequences of using words improperly and wrongly.
第二段里面for another one,其實只需要for another就可以了.后面do not give a sufficent focus on,這個用法很中式,地道用法是pay sufficient/enough attention to.我不是很理解你這里the code of the words的意思,我覺得你可以改成the meaning of the words可能更直接.后面的becomes to be這里明顯重復了,直接用becomes就可以了.后面的trying to rethink,還是很中式,改成on my second thought比較地道.
第三段positive steps,改為positive actions,后面的extent你想表達的意思是程度水平,應該用level,cultural and educational level是正確的用法.后面used right or nor改成used correctly or not比較好.后面的atmosphere改成environment.我就找出這么多地方,你可以自己再多讀幾遍.這里的the code of the words 原想表達 文字規(guī)范 的含義,我在自學英語 備考,你幫我大忙了,感謝感謝,
英語小作文,檢查語法書寫錯誤,
英語小作文,檢查語法書寫錯誤,
Basically,the picture vividly portrays a scene that two persons are confused and startling about the words in the advertising board,which conveys an another frightened meaning—sale of death bodies,instead of the topic of exhibition and selling goods.Apparently,the drawer is telling us the bad consequences of using words improperly and wrongly.
Beyond any doubt,the cartoon has subtly mirrored the in-depth implication that we need to have a right use of characters in our daily life,especially when engaging in other affairs in society.There are ,I reckon,at least two reasons accounting for such phenomenon of wrong applying to words and characters.For one thing,the careless attitude and poor awareness of some persons,lead to appearance of false gathered verbs—as the workers of making the board in the picture; for another one,some departments or firms do not give a sufficient focus on the code of the words,in which case the character use becomes to be more disorganized.Trying to rethink it,we will suffer from many unnecessary matters and problems if we let this situation continue as it is.
From my perspective,we can take some positive steps to curb this problem ,such as improving cultural and educational extent of workers ,or taking proper measures to supervise whether words are used right or not.I believe a good cultural atmosphere is awaiting us if we achieve progress in using and writing words.
這我應考寫的作文,高手批評指正 感激!
Basically,the picture vividly portrays a scene that two persons are confused and startling about the words in the advertising board,which conveys an another frightened meaning—sale of death bodies,instead of the topic of exhibition and selling goods.Apparently,the drawer is telling us the bad consequences of using words improperly and wrongly.
Beyond any doubt,the cartoon has subtly mirrored the in-depth implication that we need to have a right use of characters in our daily life,especially when engaging in other affairs in society.There are ,I reckon,at least two reasons accounting for such phenomenon of wrong applying to words and characters.For one thing,the careless attitude and poor awareness of some persons,lead to appearance of false gathered verbs—as the workers of making the board in the picture; for another one,some departments or firms do not give a sufficient focus on the code of the words,in which case the character use becomes to be more disorganized.Trying to rethink it,we will suffer from many unnecessary matters and problems if we let this situation continue as it is.
From my perspective,we can take some positive steps to curb this problem ,such as improving cultural and educational extent of workers ,or taking proper measures to supervise whether words are used right or not.I believe a good cultural atmosphere is awaiting us if we achieve progress in using and writing words.
這我應考寫的作文,高手批評指正 感激!
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