改得不對不全的地方還望諒解!
1.The market for (manufactured goods) is (which---what做表語從句的引導詞,后面句子缺少call的賓語用what) economist call “imperfect”,because each company has its own style; and all of the arts of the advertisement and salesmanship (are devoted to) making it even more imperfect (by attracting) buyers to particular brand names.
2.However,it is not just (the large number of----the large amount of 因為sugar不可數(shù)吧) sugar in modern chocolate (that explains) its success.If (this were the case---was你要單復數(shù)搭配),other products (containing sugar) would have the same effect on us.
3.We (think of) an unhealthy meal (served in excess packaging) to modern citizens who regard food as fuel (rather than) as----是不是把as去掉呀 something （to enjoy it---to enjoy 不加it,因為做sth的后置定語,和sth有邏輯上的動賓關系,因此sth就是賓語不用再加賓語it了）..
4.There was no hope (left),the only felling was hunger,(and the only emotion) was the fear of (lost innocence---losing innocence做of介詞的賓語應用動名詞） as I realized there could be (not escape----no escape要是這一空在be之前就可用not,但這在be之后就得把escape當名詞看,修飾名詞用形容詞no） from my first oyster.
5.Had she affirmed our intelligence first and (spoken about) the joy of thinking for ourselves,had she (not fanned our fear of her--應該把not放在she之前吧),we (would all have learned) even more powerfully (what meant---what had meant是不是賓語從句的時態(tài)要根據(jù)主句時態(tài)變化呢?to do our own thinking.（這是一個虛擬過去的句子,且條件句用了倒裝省略,即省略了if……,你應該在看下原句要表達什么意思,看看條件句哪句要否定,感覺怪怪的）