這是一篇過去式的作文.
It's the first day of hoilday.I went to shopping with my mom.we were at a "fashion store"Mom said :"Oh,look at that hat!It's beautiful!"I asked:"Do you want to try it on?""yes!"she said."so,what do you think?"she asked me ."The style is terrific,but I don't like the color."
這是我第一天放假.我和我的媽媽去逛街了.我們在一家"時裝店"的小商店逛.媽媽說;" 看,那頂帽子真漂亮!"我問;"你想戴以下嗎?""當然!"她說."你覺得怎么樣?""款式好,但我不喜歡顏色."
希望能夠幫助你,分.希望能給呀如果是用現在進行時寫呢。。。比如說開頭是這樣的：The Spring Festival is coming,my mother wants to buy some things for it .Today we go to the supermarket.________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.........I and my mother go and select our own year goods. In the supermarket , i choose my favourite candy and food. We choose meat , sugar and melon seeds. Till 5:00 pm, we take our year goods go home. What a happy day.我和媽媽一起購年貨。在超市，我挑選我喜歡的糖和食品。 我們選了些肉，糖和瓜子。直到下午5：00， 我們帶著我們的年貨回家了 在后面加上這些，你看合適不，看能不能幫助你。望加分?。?div style="margin-top:20px">