The table illustrates the figure on how much consumer spend on differentaspects in five SEPARATEDcountries in 2002.

The expenditure on food/drink/tobacco takes up 32.14% of total (expenditure) in TURKEY. But,while that makes up about 15.77%. As for the other four countries ,all of their figure IS between rough 30% to 15%.

9% of total expenditure is distributed into clothing/footwear in Italy . However, that OCCUPIES only 5.4% in Span. The figure for the rest three countries ,similarly,STANDS at around 6%.

Turkish spend 4.35% of their total expenditure on leisure/education ,which is followed by that of Sweden (3.22%) , Italy(3.20%) and Ireland (2.21%). The figure for Span only REPRESENTS 1.98%
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