electronic 是形容詞 這里應(yīng)該改為 electronics 名詞 電子學(xué)
a outgoing ----an outgoing
play game--playing games
work--working
waiter--waitress
second 拼寫有誤
a office--an office
最后一句話完全不對可改為 because it makes my life fruitful and happy
請改改語法 這篇文章是我的英語作文,求大俠幫我改改.
請改改語法 這篇文章是我的英語作文,求大俠幫我改改.
my name is ..,i`m from Zigong city of Sichuan province,i was graduated from zigong NO.14 Vocational High school in 2009.my major is electronic.
i`m a outgoing girl,i like learning new things,i`m good at Chinese,but English is not good.my hobbies are listening to music.play game and swimming.But i can`t swim,i`m learing to swim.i don`t have much time for my hobbies,Work makes me feel busy and tired.
waiter was my first job,secoud was a office girl,the third was a sales girl.But i`m a mould engineer now,i love this job ,because let me full my life and happy.
my name is ..,i`m from Zigong city of Sichuan province,i was graduated from zigong NO.14 Vocational High school in 2009.my major is electronic.
i`m a outgoing girl,i like learning new things,i`m good at Chinese,but English is not good.my hobbies are listening to music.play game and swimming.But i can`t swim,i`m learing to swim.i don`t have much time for my hobbies,Work makes me feel busy and tired.
waiter was my first job,secoud was a office girl,the third was a sales girl.But i`m a mould engineer now,i love this job ,because let me full my life and happy.
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