第一個(gè)翻譯的還可以,但是語(yǔ)法和說(shuō)法都有點(diǎn)別扭.我從小就在美國(guó)長(zhǎng)大,所以翻譯的一定沒(méi)問(wèn)題 :)
He fell in love the first time he set eyes on her.
He always walked her home...always.
After some time,he realized that he wasn't her Only One.But still,he waited for her...always.
＊He used the final night to prove his love to her,but he still waited...forever.
The sound of the clock echoed in the rain.Everyone prayed for him,but she cried her last tear.
The sound of the clock echoed in the rain.He still waited,like he promised...forever.
我認(rèn)為這里面沒(méi)有特別奇怪的發(fā)音,所以你按一般的發(fā)音規(guī)矩應(yīng)該發(fā)的出來(lái).
打＊的那一句,翻譯絕對(duì)正確,但是意思有點(diǎn)模糊.