有關(guān)表達(dá)“個(gè)人建議”的文章是開放式或半開放式作文,個(gè)人建議的表達(dá)實(shí)際上是在寫作中體現(xiàn)“個(gè)性”發(fā)揮的一個(gè)有效形式.要注意以下幾個(gè)方面的問題：一、事實(shí)情況的敘述與建議的提出要有自然的銜接或過渡.1. 根據(jù)寫作提示,經(jīng)過仔細(xì)的審題,將具體的現(xiàn)實(shí)狀況描寫清楚,可以作為建議提出的基礎(chǔ)或根據(jù),增加建議的合理性、針對(duì)性和可信度. 2. 事實(shí)與建議的銜接方式可以是一個(gè)詞,如：so,then等,也可以是短語或句子結(jié)構(gòu),如：in that case,for fear that,in this way等；在提出多個(gè)建議時(shí),它們之間要有自然過渡或意義遞進(jìn)的詞語(組),常見的有furthermore,what’s more,on the other hand,on the contrary,in others words,after all,not only … but also等.二、建議寫作的語言要中肯、誠實(shí).提出的建議除了要具有科學(xué)性外,還要體現(xiàn)作者誠實(shí)的態(tài)度和嚴(yán)謹(jǐn)?shù)膶懽黠L(fēng)格.有時(shí),還有必要加上一些提示性的語言,以表明是作者引用別人的思想或作者自己的想法,避免建議的獨(dú)斷或不合理性.例如,可以借用下面的表達(dá)方法：in my opinion,as far as I am concerned,according to somebody’s theory,study shows that,as you can see等.【例題展示】2008年北京奧運(yùn)之后,越來越多的人喜愛和重視體育運(yùn)動(dòng).然而你們班有些同學(xué)不以為然,他們認(rèn)為運(yùn)動(dòng)是浪費(fèi)時(shí)間,它消耗精力和體力,影響學(xué)習(xí).請你根據(jù)自己的理解,從體育運(yùn)動(dòng)的意義入手,勸告他們積極參加體育運(yùn)動(dòng),并給出合理的建議.詞數(shù)要求：120-150.【經(jīng)典范文】Nowadays, especially after the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games, more and more people are paying much more attention to their health, and sports are becoming increasingly popular. Though sports and games cost some time, they benefit people in many ways. They provide people with exercise and enjoyment, and make us strong and healthy. In many sports and games, perseverance and teamwork are trained while we are playing. Furthermore, sports and games are a source of entertainment, and people have a lot of fun in playing them. All in all, sports and games are good for people’s health, study and character training.You can arrange sports and work properly or just do some simple exercise in your spare time. On the other hand, even if it is only a walk after dinner, it will still have the same effect on your health as a football match.【點(diǎn)評(píng)】1. 總體評(píng)價(jià)習(xí)作寫得比較好.文章結(jié)構(gòu)清晰,觀點(diǎn)鮮明,主題突出.作者先總體介紹運(yùn)動(dòng)的發(fā)展情況,接著運(yùn)用豐富的語言,從各個(gè)方面敘述了運(yùn)動(dòng)的積極意義,闡述了作者的觀點(diǎn),提出了合理的建議.句子與句子之間銜接自然,行文連貫.因此全文成功的達(dá)到了預(yù)期的寫作目的,將基本信息很好地傳達(dá)給了讀者.但是文章同時(shí)也存在一些選詞或用句等方面的錯(cuò)誤.2. 亮點(diǎn) ①開篇觀點(diǎn)鮮明,表達(dá)準(zhǔn)確.more and more people are paying much attention to their health 和sports are becoming increasingly popular等這些精辟的語句,被用來引入健康和運(yùn)動(dòng)的話題,非常恰當(dāng).第二段的首句Though sports and games may cost some time, they benefit people in many ways. 作為全段的主題句,起到了很好的概括作用.②敘述中furthermore,on the other hand等過渡詞（短語）的使用,使得文章層次分明,銜接自然,并有逐級(jí)遞進(jìn)的感覺.也充分體現(xiàn)了作者扎實(shí)的語言基礎(chǔ)和嫻熟的語言駕御能力.