初一 修改英語文章
初一 修改英語文章
I have a good plan for winter vacation.every day,I usually get up at 9:30.I uaually eat a big breakfast at 9:40.then I read a book at 10:00.At noon,I usually eat a big lunch.then I play football in the park at 1:00.I sometimes go to the gym after park.then I do my homework at 3:30.I always play the computer game at 5:00.then I eat a dinner.In the evening,I uaually watch TV.I always read books before bed.then I go to bed at 10:00.
But today is different from the uaual day.Because it's Spring Festival!I'm getting up at 8:00.I'm waiting for the bus and listening to the music at 8:30.I'm taking NO.3 bus to my grandperents' house.I'm playing with my brothers and sisters in my grandperents' house.then I'm having a very big lunch at 12:00.In the afternoon,I'm going to the museum at the 1:30.I'm watching many beautiful things.then I'm go home.I'm very happy now!
大家看看這篇文章有什么錯誤?語法對不對?
I have a good plan for winter vacation.every day,I usually get up at 9:30.I uaually eat a big breakfast at 9:40.then I read a book at 10:00.At noon,I usually eat a big lunch.then I play football in the park at 1:00.I sometimes go to the gym after park.then I do my homework at 3:30.I always play the computer game at 5:00.then I eat a dinner.In the evening,I uaually watch TV.I always read books before bed.then I go to bed at 10:00.
But today is different from the uaual day.Because it's Spring Festival!I'm getting up at 8:00.I'm waiting for the bus and listening to the music at 8:30.I'm taking NO.3 bus to my grandperents' house.I'm playing with my brothers and sisters in my grandperents' house.then I'm having a very big lunch at 12:00.In the afternoon,I'm going to the museum at the 1:30.I'm watching many beautiful things.then I'm go home.I'm very happy now!
大家看看這篇文章有什么錯誤?語法對不對?
英語人氣：612 ℃時間：2020-05-22 12:34:34
優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
I和sometimes換一下位置.不要用usually.因為你是計劃.用plan to.語法倒是還好.就是文章沒什么特色.I'm watching many beautiful things.then I'm go home.這句.不是go home.是go back home.你初一的水平.已經(jīng)不錯了.
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