'some article' 加-s
Then i can find it is valuable for me.去掉is更好
some things 換為something
my lives 改為單數(shù)
Books can make me feel happy or excited.改為Books can lighten my world.
I will study hard to achieve my dream.
or 改為 and
so that 改為 in this way
start out small 是中式英語 英語中沒有這樣的表達(dá) 刪掉這句話 或者
改為start from now on
article 在這里加S（有時(shí)不加 你要好好了解它的用法 還有其他很多意思）
if one day i die 改為 if i die one day
1.wang 改為want
2.,too去掉,有點(diǎn)多余
3.for readers.So that,i will feel 改為for readers so that i can feel
4.If one day i die改為If i die one day
5.some things 改為something
6.my lives改為my live
7.some article 改為some articles
8.start out small.改為starts from the minor
初一的英語小作文,麻煩幫忙修改一下
初一的英語小作文,麻煩幫忙修改一下
I want to be a writer
I want to be a writer when i grow up,because i like readingbooks.Books can make me feel happy or excited.And i wang to write some books for readers.So that,i will feel successful and readers can feel happy,too.
If one day i die,These books will be my wealth.I should do some things when i am alive.So i want to be a writer to minute my lives.
But it is difficult to be a writer.However,i won't give up.I will write some article from now on.I think i should start out small.Then i can find it is valuable for me.
……好像很多不對呢……
article是否可數(shù)呢?(⊙_⊙)?
麻煩幫忙修改一下語法錯(cuò)誤O(∩_∩)O謝謝
還有：
【我會(huì)為我的理想努力奮斗的】也麻煩翻譯一下~\(≧▽≦)/~啦啦啦
O(∩_∩)O謝謝 麻煩了【寫的不好請?jiān)彙?br/>【如果可以的話,最好有講解】
I want to be a writer
I want to be a writer when i grow up,because i like readingbooks.Books can make me feel happy or excited.And i wang to write some books for readers.So that,i will feel successful and readers can feel happy,too.
If one day i die,These books will be my wealth.I should do some things when i am alive.So i want to be a writer to minute my lives.
But it is difficult to be a writer.However,i won't give up.I will write some article from now on.I think i should start out small.Then i can find it is valuable for me.
……好像很多不對呢……
article是否可數(shù)呢?(⊙_⊙)?
麻煩幫忙修改一下語法錯(cuò)誤O(∩_∩)O謝謝
還有：
【我會(huì)為我的理想努力奮斗的】也麻煩翻譯一下~\(≧▽≦)/~啦啦啦
O(∩_∩)O謝謝 麻煩了【寫的不好請?jiān)彙?br/>【如果可以的話,最好有講解】
英語人氣：384 ℃時(shí)間：2020-05-22 12:34:37
優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
我來回答
類似推薦
- 初一下英語修改作文
- 初一 修改英語文章
- My favorite fruit 英語初一作文.
- 英語好的朋友 麻煩幫我修改一下這篇小作文吧
- 麻煩英語高手幫修改一下這篇文章~急用,
- 明明過生日時(shí)時(shí)請好朋友們吃飯,買了4瓶橙汁,每瓶0.75升,每杯可倒3/10升,這些橙汁可倒多少杯?
- 花兒推開了春天的大門；雷電推開了夏天的大門仿著再寫4個(gè)句子!
- 隔一條長而寬的河如何測出松樹的高?
- 一個(gè)三位數(shù)除以一個(gè)二位數(shù),商最大是( )位數(shù),最小是( )位數(shù)
- 已知函數(shù)f(x)(x不等于0）,對于任意非零實(shí)數(shù)x,y,滿足f（xy）=f（x）+f（y）.
- 根號(hào)18/根號(hào)8*根號(hào)27/2
- sorry to break your walkman 翻譯成中文
猜你喜歡
- 1人類的視覺是什么視覺,是真正看見嗎?
- 2為什么漢語拼音與英文字母一樣?
- 3英語高手可以幫我看一篇文章有什么語法或詞匯錯(cuò)誤嗎?還能添加點(diǎn)什么嗎?
- 4在家庭電路中，以下情況會(huì)引起保險(xiǎn)絲熔斷的是（ ） A.用測電筆接觸火線 B.連接電路時(shí)誤將火線與零線接通 C.將開關(guān)用導(dǎo)線接通 D.電路中用電器總功率過大
- 5理想,在饑餓面前,它是糧食……仿寫句子兩句?
- 6焰色反應(yīng)是一種化學(xué)反應(yīng)嗎?
- 7This ruler is green.同意句
- 8某年的10月份有5個(gè)星期二,4個(gè)星期三,這年的國慶節(jié)是星期幾
- 9用一根鐵絲圍成一個(gè)邊長是8分米的正方形，如果把它拉成平行四邊形，面積減少了16平方分米，這個(gè)平行四邊形的高是多少分米？
- 10They arrived at teh small village_____(safe)at last
- 11分?jǐn)?shù)應(yīng)用題一批稻谷放在甲,乙兩個(gè)糧庫中,甲庫所存的稻谷數(shù)量是乙?guī)斓陌朔种?后來從甲庫取出42噸,乙?guī)?/a>
- 12You'll never marry her-She's much too good for you