這里給你寫一篇較formal的
In the eye of some people, the way we conduct military training in order todevelope
to obey discipline and form the spirit of cooperation can let students to understand how to
get along with pioneer and adapt to new circustance in short time, while others believe that
part of students can't afford the strong sunshine which do harm to body health in terms of poor
body condition, morever short-period training can't match what we expect at first.
In my opinion, it's necessay to participate in military training for students, because not onlyit can
help strenghen our body ,but also can activate the coordination among students.