My birthday was in July was改為is.
建議不要分那么多段
語法上面沒有什么大錯誤,
但是結(jié)構(gòu)可以修整
我不知道你是幾年級的學(xué)生
以下是我對你作文的一些建議哈
我重新寫了一篇
i plan to go for a visit to yunnan,in order to see my .grandmother and some other people who misses me a lot.As Kunming is the Spring City.I will go there by train with my family.
I’d like to visit Dali and some other( places of interest)用得好O(∩_∩)O.with a camera,a pair of sunglasses and so on
I want to celebrate it with my grandmother and old friends.since My birthday was in July ,I can not sure whether i"ll be late.
I think I will have a wonderful time這個(gè)我還沒有學(xué)這么多，七年級。我就這樣寫應(yīng)該可以把。。。謝謝你哈恩好吧 - -浪費(fèi)了?。。〔贿^你沒有什么語法錯誤！樓上的 有點(diǎn)考慮得太細(xì)致了，你可以把作文拿給你老師看，應(yīng)該說是沒什么問題的
我寫了一篇英語作文,希望英語高手幫我檢查一下語法以及意思用法上有沒有什么問題.
我寫了一篇英語作文,希望英語高手幫我檢查一下語法以及意思用法上有沒有什么問題.
I plan to go to Yunnan to visit my grandmother and some other people.They miss me very much.
The weather there is always cool,I think.Because Kunming is the Spring City.I plan to take a train to go there.I’d like to go there with my family.
I’d like to visit Dali and some other places of interest.I’d like to take a camera,a pair of sunglasses and so on.
My birthday was in July.I want to celebrate it with my grandmother and old friends.But I think it will be late,
I think I will have a wonderful time.
另外。我的學(xué)生證在操場上丟失了可以理解為My Student ID losts on the playground嗎？
I plan to go to Yunnan to visit my grandmother and some other people.They miss me very much.
The weather there is always cool,I think.Because Kunming is the Spring City.I plan to take a train to go there.I’d like to go there with my family.
I’d like to visit Dali and some other places of interest.I’d like to take a camera,a pair of sunglasses and so on.
My birthday was in July.I want to celebrate it with my grandmother and old friends.But I think it will be late,
I think I will have a wonderful time.
另外。我的學(xué)生證在操場上丟失了可以理解為My Student ID losts on the playground嗎？
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