He was born in September 7th 1930
具體到某天用 on
When he was at school 還是去掉 was
In 1973,He has developed a new kind of rice.
這句話改成有問題
應(yīng)該有一般過去式 改為 In 1973 He produced
a new kind of rice develop是改進(jìn)的意思
改進(jìn)了一種新種米 既然是新的怎么改進(jìn)呢?
所以改成生產(chǎn) Then he becomes a famous scientist
應(yīng)用過去式 且去掉scientist 比較好
Then he became famous
many countries grow more rice than before
這句話 用grow 似乎不妥 改為produce更好
than before 可以省略
其他都可以了
檢查這篇英語作文有何語法拼寫錯誤 急
檢查這篇英語作文有何語法拼寫錯誤 急
Yuan long ping is a great scientist.He was born in September 7th 1930 in Beijing .he studied in Southwest Agricultural College when he was young.He worked very hard.When he was at school.In 1973,He has developed a new kind of rice.Then he becomes a famous scientist.Because of the new kind of rice,many countries grow more rice than before.In my opinion He is a hero of china!
Yuan long ping is a great scientist.He was born in September 7th 1930 in Beijing .he studied in Southwest Agricultural College when he was young.He worked very hard.When he was at school.In 1973,He has developed a new kind of rice.Then he becomes a famous scientist.Because of the new kind of rice,many countries grow more rice than before.In my opinion He is a hero of china!
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