求英語語法達(dá)人,幫忙看下我分析的三個(gè)句子語法對(duì)不對(duì)啊
And I believe it has a positive effect on the  creative  capacities of New Yorkers—for creation is (in part merely) the business of forgoing the great and small distractions.                                             語法分析： it后面的整個(gè)句子作主句I believe 的賓語從句.      on the  creative  capacities of New Yorker 作effect的賓語補(bǔ)足語.for creation …… 作前面句子的原因狀語.(in part merely) —插入語.of forgoing the great and small distractions作business的定語.
•Many people who have no real independence of spirit depend on the city’s tremendous variety and source of excitement for spiritual sustenance and maintenance of morle.                                            •語法分析：      Many people ——主語,depend on ——謂語,the city’s ……excitement ——賓語.who have ……spirit,是who 引導(dǎo)的定語從句.第一個(gè)and連接兩個(gè)賓語同位語,for后面是and連接的兩個(gè)目的狀語.
•I think that although many persons are here from some excess of spirit (which caused them to break away from their small towm),some,too,are here from a deficiency of spirit,who find in New York a protection,or an easy substitution.                                                                                                        •語法分析：      that引導(dǎo)的賓語從句中,many persons are here 是主干成分,from some excess of spirit —原因狀語,(which …… towm)—定語從句,修飾many persons.some,too— 插入語,后面跟的是并列句,who引導(dǎo)的定從句,修飾省略的主語many persons .
幫忙看下分析的對(duì)嗎,或者是您幫我分析下,明天老師讓我們自己講課要用的,