With the socio-economic development and national policy support, the rapid expansion of the number of private enterprises has become an important part of the national economy, but most private enterprises are based on traditional management models and concepts, operation and investment management are open to question , lax financial management, no effective system of internal management and control system. Shocked the world Qiong Minyuan, Yin Guangxia events, all internal systems and business is a certain relationship. Therefore, improving their internal control system to ensure that accounting information true, reliable, and for improving corporate governance model and the information disclosure system to protect the legitimate rights and interests of investors and ensure the efficient functioning of capital markets to ensure the implementation of the country's financial discipline, improving the operational efficiency has a very important significance.
根據(jù)我在美國生活的經(jīng)驗,其中修改了5處.比如在英語中沒有如雨后春筍般迅速成長,只有迅速發(fā)展.別的還有幾處你可以看看別人用翻譯機翻譯出來的結(jié)果,一對比就知道了.
民營企業(yè)：
Private Enterprises
注意哦!美國是有企業(yè)和公司之分的
民營公司：
Private companies
（在中國估計那些都是公司吧,企業(yè)的注冊資本是很高的）
內(nèi)部控制：
一般美國不會說內(nèi)部控制,直接翻譯的話外國人一看會覺得很假.
一般都是說內(nèi)部管理
Management就夠了
Internal management就是又突出了一下內(nèi)部,
但是我不是很懂經(jīng)濟,這些問題應(yīng)該沒有所謂的“外部管理吧”
完善：
complete
consummate
perfect
這些是用于形容詞的
動詞的話是
complete
就可以了,很正式了
順便好心提醒一點：不用什么詞都太正式了,像美國的什么銀行業(yè)啊,保險業(yè)啊那些看似都是被專屬詞充斥的行業(yè),其實很多詞一看嚇一跳,都是源自最簡單的詞,反而到中國來,很多人寫的連美國人都看不懂,他們就會覺得這些材料很假,很做作.
資本市場:
Capital Market
好像我在美國學(xué)的就這個,應(yīng)該錯不了.