November 10th sunday snowy
Today was sunday.In the morning,(這里逗號)
I ate breakfast and (如果是改錯別字就不用加and了)
I did(have done也可以) my homework .
In the afternoon,(這里也是)
I had a math class.I got home(會不會令誤會呢 got back to 或是 came行嗎?)
at half past four(這里錯了 你想指幾多點...是14:30嗎?這樣就half past two)
Then I played with my friend(要加s嗎?)
and played computer (games?) at six o'clock/6pm
In the evening I ate dinner with my family.(這里的句號到那里了00?)
Then,I went for (a) walk.
(I had to do homework but I thought it was very boring.)
第二篇
If I had a million (沒有of)dollars
If I had a million(一樣) dollars.
I would do many things.
Firstly,(逗號啦) I would deposit (我們不用put的,但可以用save) some money in the bank(錯字).
I would buy a big house for my family (by using the rest of money)
Secondly行嗎?,I would travel around the world.
Thirdly行嗎?,
I would buy a lot of boks (because) I like reading (and) I think reading is important.
Finally,(逗號00)I would (donate)我們不用GIVE的 some money to charity.
如果你想可以加It is because I want to help other people.
(What would you do if you had a million dollars?)這個通順一點
好啦,提醒一句其實上網(wǎng)也有很多類似的作文 用英文搜尋就行了
兩篇英語作文,幫我看看哪里有錯的
兩篇英語作文,幫我看看哪里有錯的
November 10th sunday snowy
Today was sunday .In the morning .I ate breakfast .I did my homework .In the afternoon .I had a math class .I got home at half past fourteen o'clock .Then I played with my friend and played computer games at sixteen o'clock .In the evening I ate dinner with my family Then .I went for walk .I had to do homework .I think .It was very boring
第二篇
If I had a million of dollars
If I had a million of dollars .I would do many things .Firstly .I would put some money in the bnk.
the rest of money .I would buy a big house for my family .I would travel around the world .I would buy a lot of books .Because i like reading .I think reading is important .Finally .I would give some money to charity .Because I want to help other people .If you had a million of dollars ,How about you?
November 10th sunday snowy
Today was sunday .In the morning .I ate breakfast .I did my homework .In the afternoon .I had a math class .I got home at half past fourteen o'clock .Then I played with my friend and played computer games at sixteen o'clock .In the evening I ate dinner with my family Then .I went for walk .I had to do homework .I think .It was very boring
第二篇
If I had a million of dollars
If I had a million of dollars .I would do many things .Firstly .I would put some money in the bnk.
the rest of money .I would buy a big house for my family .I would travel around the world .I would buy a lot of books .Because i like reading .I think reading is important .Finally .I would give some money to charity .Because I want to help other people .If you had a million of dollars ,How about you?
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