幫忙看一下我這篇英語短文有沒有什么嚴(yán)重的語法錯誤?
幫忙看一下我這篇英語短文有沒有什么嚴(yán)重的語法錯誤?
短文是這樣的：Jerry is flying a kite in the park.He was very happy.But now he is surprised.Because the kite line is borken.He can not get.His classmate Mary come say:"I can help you with your to it." Mary stretched her hands.But Mary fell into the water.Jerry is very happy.
有沒有什么語法錯誤,比如過去式,現(xiàn)在進行時,這些,我搞不清啊!
大哥大姐幫下小妹忙!
是現(xiàn)在進行時，一樓，不是過去式，老師要求.
Jerry is flying a kite in the park.He is very happy.But now he is surprised.Because the kite line is borken.He can not get.His classmate Mary come and say:"I can help you with your to it." Mary stretched her hands.But Mary fell into the water.Jerry is very happy.
短文是這樣的：Jerry is flying a kite in the park.He was very happy.But now he is surprised.Because the kite line is borken.He can not get.His classmate Mary come say:"I can help you with your to it." Mary stretched her hands.But Mary fell into the water.Jerry is very happy.
有沒有什么語法錯誤,比如過去式,現(xiàn)在進行時,這些,我搞不清啊!
大哥大姐幫下小妹忙!
是現(xiàn)在進行時，一樓，不是過去式，老師要求.
Jerry is flying a kite in the park.He is very happy.But now he is surprised.Because the kite line is borken.He can not get.His classmate Mary come and say:"I can help you with your to it." Mary stretched her hands.But Mary fell into the water.Jerry is very happy.
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優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
時態(tài)太混亂了,標(biāo)點錯誤也很多,But這個詞不能出現(xiàn)在句首除非用However代替,而且內(nèi)容不妥..Mary掉河里了,怎么Jerry那么高興啊?居心不良!還有,Mary stretched her hands,你想表達(dá)什么?看不懂..其實一樓分析的很好啊,應(yīng)...
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