短文改錯:Now I'd like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday .
短文改錯:Now I'd like to tell you something took place in my school yesterday .
短文改錯:NowI'dlike totellyousomethingtookplaceinmyschool yesterday.In theafernoon weareall heldtogether forour18-years-old birthday .Atthefirstwepromisedthatlikegrown-upswe should be responsibleforoursociety.Thenweexpressedthank toourparents whoexperiencedhardshipstobring usupand ourteacherswhoeducatedus heart or soul. Andourteachersalsogavetous cards expressingourgoodcongratulatinsandwishesto us .Firnally,we putonwonderfully performances.
共有10處錯誤,有漏詞,有多余,有修改,每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞.
短文改錯:NowI'dlike totellyousomethingtookplaceinmyschool yesterday.In theafernoon weareall heldtogether forour18-years-old birthday .Atthefirstwepromisedthatlikegrown-upswe should be responsibleforoursociety.Thenweexpressedthank toourparents whoexperiencedhardshipstobring usupand ourteacherswhoeducatedus heart or soul. Andourteachersalsogavetous cards expressingourgoodcongratulatinsandwishesto us .Firnally,we putonwonderfully performances.
共有10處錯誤,有漏詞,有多余,有修改,每處錯誤及修改均僅限一詞.
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更正一樓一些錯誤,總共十處錯誤!具體情況如下：Now I'd like to tell you (改成something that took 或 something taking) place in my school yesterday. In theafernoon we (去掉 are)all heldtogether ...
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