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My wonderful winter vacation
I have a wonderful winter vacation for about 1 month.In the vacation,the weather always cold.I required a warm place to have a great time.Hainan sounds like a good place that I could enjoy.I began to think about travaling to Hainan Province.
My family and I went there by plane.When we got there,we decided to go to the beach.To tell you the truth,the wind there was so cool.My parent lay on the beach.I surfed with my brother in the sea.The warm water made us relaxed.How comfortable it was!I stayed there for five days.
Two weeks later,Spring Festival was coming.On the first day of the year,we bought many delicious things for the first day of New Year's.Then at night,my mother made a big dinner for family.We ate it and watched TV happily.At the same time,my seven-year brother said:"Why can't people celebrate the New Year every day?"We began laughing.
What a wonderful winter vacation!Why did the time pass so quickly?
一樓的，是不是時(shí)態(tài)錯(cuò)了。你們幫我找一下，錯(cuò)很多也沒(méi)關(guān)系，我承受的了。對(duì)了，有錯(cuò)的幫我改一下，不至于錯(cuò)很慘的吧