求修改一篇英語作文,
Everyone wants to succeed.So do I.But there are a lot of difficulties on the way to succeed and stop us from being succeed.So,how can we do?There are some advice to you.
First,you should set a goal.Because a gole can make you konw what should you do and let you go towards to success all the time.Second,you must make a plan for you a goal.This is a key to success.Due to the fact that,a plan will let you understand the next set clearly.And then,you will near to the success.Third,you have to have a never-give-up attitude.Like this,you will be succeed nearly.Because,all of everything's result come from everybody's attitude.
These are all my suggestions.I think if you do things like these,you will be succeed in the future.At last ,beliebe in yourself.Beacuse there is a saying:"There is a will,there is a way"
希望高手可以幫我認(rèn)真修改,耽誤之際是看看看語法有沒有誤!必須在十點(diǎn)之前,
還有,最后一句諺語我們老師說是“there is a will,there is a way”有志者事竟成
但是我看網(wǎng)上的都是“Where There Is a Will There Is a Way “,寫哪一個(gè)?