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  • 幫我改下初中的英語作文,

    幫我改下初中的英語作文,
    I don't want to grow up
    i'm 15 years old now,I look like other students ,so busy,I have too homework to do
    and don't have enough time to play with friends .
    one day ,I dream abrout my kid's time
    in a park,I play with my friends ,we all enjoy it
    we haven't any homework ,and needn't study all day
    later,I back home ,panrents don't to criticize me .and I hvae many time to enjoy the
    lunch ,and i can watch cartoonsat home ,it's so funny .
    evening ,i can go to bed after 10 o'clock
    the next day ,i can get up at noon.and i can see sky ,ican see sea.
    i go to amusement park ,i only need to pay for half-price ticket and even need't pay for any thing
    so,i can enjoy any amusement park.it's so happy and fun
    just now ,my alarm clock is ring ,oh ,it's just a dream .
    next ,i have a quick breakfast ,it's 7 o'clock .I was always late for school,today.too
    next,i go to teacher's office ,it's too bad .
    then,i start to siwm at the sea of books ,i don't want to grow up
    god ,please help me ,help me
    英語人氣:948 ℃時(shí)間:2020-01-27 15:02:08
    優(yōu)質(zhì)解答
    i'm 15 years old now,I look like (look like 是看起來像,不太合適,可以用be like)other students ,so busy(這個(gè)用法好像不對(duì).),I have too(應(yīng)該加一個(gè)much) homework to do and don't have enough time to pla...
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