.A trip in summer vacationThis holiday,I went to my hometowm to vist my relatives.It is a nice palace and there are many trees around it .In the trip there ,I saw lots of flowers growing on each side.They are beautifulandlovely.Getting there,my aunt was standing on front of the door waiting for us.She’s a frending woman with long hair.We had great lunch,the food was delicious.Finally,we took the bus to come back.In my opinion ,the scenery there was beautiful,but the people was the most beautiful.2.Look,we’re having fun.Staying at home is the best way to spend the vacation.Now,I’m playing with my friends at home.My cat is running after my feiend Add.They are having fun.And my sister is writing back to her aunt,which has cost her a week.My parents are working out the expenses.To my surprise,my brother is keeping quiet!And,do you kown what am I doing?I’m writing the passage.3.My Happy Vacation.Do you want to know how did I spend my vacation?Well,every day,I got up by 8:00.After breakfast ,it’s time to do homework.After that,I do some exeicise and go out to have a rest.In the afternoon,I spend one hour sleeping and playing computer.In fact,I always have some other activities.Such as,visiting my friends and going swimming.Howerer,it was a nice holiday.4.My matherMy mother is a good mother and teacher.When we are at home,she always encourages me and never dotes on me.She teachers me how to be a good child.When she is at school,she often helps her students.She found one of her student have a cold last winter,she went to buy medicine soon in such heavy snow.Well,this is her,I love her .5.La dame aux Game lias was wroten by Alexandre dionas Jr.It was an involute story.It is a story about Marguerite’s history which is an exception,and it makes write write:”I love it ,and I have told the reader.It was a duty”.In this history,we know about the ugly world and human greedy.A bout Margueri,she was a lovely but sad woman.She wanted to have love and friends,but she couldn’t.She was in dark times.And the world isn’t yet wolly good,then at lest it becoming better.So,wo shouldn’t afraid of future.We should letus be good,be tum,like the sad woman.
說實話,你的英語功底很好··我是個高中生··作為前輩··我可以說·我在你這個時候絕對寫不出這樣的文章··但是你的作文里有個很嚴重的有很簡單的語法錯誤··就是你的主語后面直接加地點狀語（When we at home） ··這是作文大忌··很容易讓改卷老師你的印象分的··加油··
順便說一句··敢復(fù)制者··滾··這都是我一個字一個字打出來的