高一英語短文改錯(cuò).共有十處語言錯(cuò)誤.錯(cuò)誤涉及一個(gè)單詞的增加、刪除或修改
Several days before,a few of my friend and I went on a picnic on the beach of the Jialing River.It is about five miles far from the city.We arrived that place in the morning.Most of us go swimming immediately.While in the water ,we played an interesting game.Those which were on the beach had some other activity.Some of them even sang and danced happy.There were still others who were interested in nothing,except picked beautiful stones.In the evening,we returned home.How a happy dat it was!