1、不能直接用born in Hangzhou.應(yīng)為I was born in Hangzhou.過去式.
2、youngers最好改成teenagers
3、I Am pleased to be able to join you.中把be able to 劃去吧,有點累贅.
4、Today,we can gather here is a fate.語法錯誤.至少應(yīng)該在we前加that.但建議說成I feel lucky that we can get together today.
fate 用作命運更多些.
5、I like art so that is the reason why I come here to compete for this position.這句話語義重復(fù)了,而且作為演講不要用太長的句子,更不要太文縐縐.或者分成兩個句子不用so .
建議說成I like art so much that I came(應(yīng)該過去式,或用成 am standing ) here to compete for the position.或者用I like art very much.And that's the reason why I came ...
6、especially do the thing 將do改成doing
7、 And the friendship of all dormitory is also very important.不曉得你為何用dormitory,如果你指室友間的友誼,用roommates,dormitory指寢室.
8、ok,i know my english is not good enough ,i will continue studying.語言上,將continue改成keep on更地道些.個人認為,不用謙虛,這是許多初學(xué)者（甚至已經(jīng)很有水平的人）愛說的話.但這只是中國文化中經(jīng)常提倡的,實際上在英國文化中有些多余（個人理解）.建議把演講稿練熟了,自信些就行了.
祝成功.
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英語翻譯
My name is ***,I am 15 years old,born in Hangzhou .I am open-minded ,quick in thought and very fond of history.In my spare time,I have broad interests like many other youngers.I like reading books,especially those about *******.I Am pleased to be able to join you.Today,we can gather here is a fate.I like art so that is the reason why I come here to compete for this position.generally speaking ,i am a hard working student especially do the thing i am interested in.i will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.I think I'm a good team player and I'm a person of great honesty to others.Also I am able to work under certain pressure.That’s all.Thank you for giving me the chance.
I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning,So,I think in the days ahead we can become friends,And the friendship of all dormitory is also very important
ok,i know my english is not good enough ,i will continue studying.
that is all,thank you for your attention
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My name is ***,I am 15 years old,born in Hangzhou .I am open-minded ,quick in thought and very fond of history.In my spare time,I have broad interests like many other youngers.I like reading books,especially those about *******.I Am pleased to be able to join you.Today,we can gather here is a fate.I like art so that is the reason why I come here to compete for this position.generally speaking ,i am a hard working student especially do the thing i am interested in.i will try my best to finish it no matter how difficult it is.I think I'm a good team player and I'm a person of great honesty to others.Also I am able to work under certain pressure.That’s all.Thank you for giving me the chance.
I always believe that one will easily lag behind unless he keeps on learning,So,I think in the days ahead we can become friends,And the friendship of all dormitory is also very important
ok,i know my english is not good enough ,i will continue studying.
that is all,thank you for your attention
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