求高手幫忙看看英文的自我介紹?.請幫忙修改錯誤地方!
面試要用的.所以請保證正確率.
看看哪里有語法或用詞錯誤!
Good afternoon,my mane is XX.Today I participate this interview .First i want to say thank you for giving me the chance.It is really a great honor to have this opportunity for the interview,i would like to answer whatever you may raise,and i hope i can make a good performance today.Now i will introduce myself briefly.I am a 19-year-old gril who would graduate from shanghai nanhu vocational school in 2009,my specialty is Aviation service.I spent about 3 years to learn sth that i would need in the work in the future.Such as electrionic ticket,security check,and anything else and so on.In the school my nearly all school record was fine.Besides,i have got many diploma before.They are all writed in my resume.All of these was credited to my earnest .In addition,i am a person who has responsibility and conscientious .Generally speaking ,i am a hard working student especially do the thing i am interested in.I will try my best to make it perfect no matter how difficult it is.
可以順便提供我些.自我介紹比較好的句子.用詞的.或可以涉及寫的方面.