I’m gold to stand on here Today
此句中的 on 應(yīng)去掉.
I want to talking about friendship.
talking 應(yīng)改為 talk
Friendship is an important part of our life.
去掉 of
Friendship isn’t always easily kept
應(yīng)改為 easily to keep
you should treat her like you her secrets ,
此句邏輯有錯(cuò).你是不是想表達(dá):你應(yīng)該把她當(dāng)做彼此共同的秘密?如果是這樣的話,因該是:you should treat her like the secret of both of you.
Keep your promise with your friend
這句話前面應(yīng)加 So
We met each other two years ago
可以把met 換為 knew,突出認(rèn)識(shí)
on the Internet
建議換成 by the Internet,因?yàn)榍懊嬉呀?jīng)出現(xiàn)on 了
When I have problems, I will ask her to halp me .
可以換成:she is here to help me .您的這句話太中文式了.
please give you true
your true heart
總體來說,還是不錯(cuò)哦!
希望能幫助到你,Good Luck!
幫忙修改下英文演講稿,.標(biāo)注下哪里有語法錯(cuò)誤.
幫忙修改下英文演講稿,.標(biāo)注下哪里有語法錯(cuò)誤.
Hello everyone,my name is LengPinwen.I’m gold to stand on here Today.I want to talking about friendship.
Friendship is an important part of our life.Everyone needs friends.But how to keep friendship?Friendship isn’t always easily kept.When you want to keep a friend,you should treat her like you her secrets ,because she trusts you .Keep your promise with your friend.Share things with your friend.Stick up for your friend.When your friend is in trouble,you must help her.
I have a true friend.We met each other two years ago.we are not at the same school nor the same city.We talk on the telephone ,on the Internet and we write letters.When I have problems,I will ask her to halp me .Though we do not meet very often ,we keep our friendship very well.when you meet a true friend ,please give you true heart to her!That’s all.Thank you!
Hello everyone,my name is LengPinwen.I’m gold to stand on here Today.I want to talking about friendship.
Friendship is an important part of our life.Everyone needs friends.But how to keep friendship?Friendship isn’t always easily kept.When you want to keep a friend,you should treat her like you her secrets ,because she trusts you .Keep your promise with your friend.Share things with your friend.Stick up for your friend.When your friend is in trouble,you must help her.
I have a true friend.We met each other two years ago.we are not at the same school nor the same city.We talk on the telephone ,on the Internet and we write letters.When I have problems,I will ask her to halp me .Though we do not meet very often ,we keep our friendship very well.when you meet a true friend ,please give you true heart to her!That’s all.Thank you!
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